Well so far your book talk is excellent. I just think you should tell us what an origami is. I like your book talk so far because it makes me want to read more of your blog post. Keep Up The Good Work.
I like your thinking. How come you didn't add more? And why did you not talk more about your opinion and the character?
What made you want to read this book? Is Tommy the mane character in the book? What do you like about this book so far?